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Bonjour à tous,
Alors je me permets de vous ecrire parce que j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide. Je pars prochainement à Londres, je veux trouver un travail sur place donc j'ai réaliser une lettre de motivation qui sera accompagnée de mon CV. Est ce que qqun peu il jeter un coup d'oeuil et me corriger?Mon anglais n'est pas top top! C'est une lettre simple parce que je vais surement faire du porte à porte au début..! Si vous avez des plans pour trouver un job de plus..
MERCI BEAUCOUP, vos suggestions me seront d'une grande aide.
Voici la lettre :(coordonnées+date à droite!)
Mes coordonnées
October 5, 2007
Dear Madam, Dear Sir,
I got a Higher National Diploma in tourism in June 2007 in *** in France. For my examen and my professional future it seems to me important to speak correctly english. For this reason, I decided to emigrate in England to concretize this objective. In order to integrate me into your country, I would want to find a work.
Work in your firm would enable me to perfect my english, to acquire a professional experience, to live a new experience and discover an other culture.
I already have to exercise diverse works and today I would sincerely like to integrate your firm to learn your way of working. This experience will be for me very beneficial. I wish to show you my motivation and to provide you with my services
I am a serious, conscentious, dynamic and hard-working. Moreover I appreciate particularly the contact with people. I will do my utmost to give you satisfaction.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm.
Thank you for you consideration.
Yours Faithfully
Encl. : personal CV
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